bring me down!? not a chance.

dont let those words bring u down :)

call me ugly.
call me fat.
call me stupid.
words dont phase me.
couple of letters and sounds from the mouth, doesnt bother me.

kill them with kindness,
they dont deserve my kindness.

tell me to go kill myself.
maybe, just maybe, i'll do it, just to prove a point.
see how heavy the guilt weighs on your shoulders.

hugs and kisses,
and painful wishes, simply wont help my cause.
sympathy and tears, only make me weaker, so HUSH UP!
i need to save my strength for the people of the world.
for the world wasn't meant for peace.
if the world had peace, we would all be bananas!
and quite frankly, im not very fond of bananas.

the world cant be perfect, and neither can the people in it.
so drop your weapons, but dont stop fighting.
play a fair war, because those rotten bananas only make you stronger.

Reviews

[CHRIS ANDES]

hugs and kisses,
and painful wishes
i just have to repost these lines coz they made me smile
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nice write :) very true

[Heromen Selena]

"If the world had peace, we would all be bananas!
And quite frankly, i'm not very fond of bananas."

I'll tell you what, I am not fond of bananas either. This line made me giggle and I like this blurp of writing. Good job.

[pinpen]

loved the last stanza, truth in this. Simply amazing!

[Tabitha t]

QUOTE: tell me to go kill myself.
maybe, just maybe, i'll do it, just to prove a point.
see how heavy the guilt weighs on your shoulders.

this is something that though I have never been told this I have wondered if people think about this before they say things like that.
What would you do if they actually did it? how would you be able to continue on living while knowing you are responsible for someone's death?

[Richy Moon]

A great point well stated! It's going into my library for sure :D

[Daniela May]

I loved this so much, I'm adding it to my library :D I enjoyed t because Ot speaks the truth without droning on and sounding boring(my writing tends to be boring). And it really shows your emotions, I liked this poem a lot :D x

[SlightlyOdd]

This is nice i like it

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Haha! Rotten bananas tend to ruin your day, if you ask me. But this poem speaks the truth! Very good poem!

[Destiny Crawford]

I dont really like bananas either, but I REALLY LOVED this poem :)