bully

so its my fault for being human.
these people are mean,
sarcastic,
rude,
judgmental,
cruel,
heartless,
unfair,
have no idea what each person go through.
so what im human!
i have hobbies, as any human should.
i like things, as any human should.
i have feelings, like any human does!
your words and punches dont help anyone!
all they do is cause trouble for the innocent!
do you even realize how hard it is for them to go home and explain the tears and bruises!
do you know how hard it is for their parents to have their children unsafe and hurt!
its SICK!
kids kill themselves because of your words and violence!
yes kids!
only mere CHILDREN! they didnt even get to grow up because of you!
if you get a laugh out of this then ive got a stern speech waiting for you!!!
just because you have an opinion doesnt mean your have to share it.
if your trying to impress your "friends" then i have 3 things to say.
- they arent your friends if you have to impress them to get the to like you.
- they arent your friends if your have to abuse an innocent person to get them to like you.
- you arent any better for caring what they think, and for caring enough to abuse someone.

Author's Note

ok! dont judge me too soon! this is my second poem on here and ive still got the newby jitters! xoxo - Eden Maple

Reviews

[CHRIS ANDES]

well, this is a world of different people with different personality
and I can't deny I also experienced such
..but it really helps you to become stronger
why care what others say about you?
what's important is you believe in yourself
...well,anyway you have a great idea about this poem
=]

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this is so enpowering! extremely true aswell, it is sick and i love this piece

[SuicidePact.]

Well done.

[pinpen]

AMEN!!! To this write. So well said.

[Aravind]

Oh wow... Wonderfully done!! Again, STANZAS!! try them out.. they make the poem flow altogether differently..

[Heromen Selena]

You are a very powerful writer with no know how of making it..I'm not sure how quite to put it...flow I guess? This makes me feel like you're angry and you want to world to know it. You get that point across nicely :) but at the same time it's like a message to the bully rather than an actually poem. In the start of it you maybe intended it to be a poem but as you started getting in to it it transformed into more like a story. I agree with the topic. Bullying is so wrong. If I thought my child was being abuse by some other kid I would be furious. You should maybe try and change it to a story like format or condense the sentences that have a greater meaning to them. Then I'm sure you'll have a winner for sure :)

[Diana Montoya]

I like the meassage in this... It´s very true.
Good job

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

It's very good! The way you write your poems is a lot a like I do. I don't rhyme. It's good to see I'm not thee only one!! Excellent write!

[AmandaPanda]

I know the feeling of being bullied. Its hard on anyone. This poem expresses the feelings of how you hate bullies and what they do. I love this poem. :)

[Daniela May]

Yeah i reslly liked it. Its very expressive and heartfelt. I have written a poemmyself about bullying, you can read it if you like to compare buot i definitely think your is better as it gives a very good perspective, and is extremely well structured. Xxx