those clouds

yeah, im talking about those deadly ones that make you inside when they appear out of no where! yikes,...

its today that your playing.
its tomorrow that your fighting.
its today that the sky is cloudless.
its tomorrow that the clouds appear.
not the light, fluffy, white clouds that look as soft as heaven.
im talking about the black as night, deadly as poison clouds.
the mean clouds that scare your children to hiding under their beds.
and they arent just clouds, they are evil, devilous clouds.
they hold that mean stuff called rain, that brings everyone down.
they also carry that stuff called thunder and his partner in crime, lightning.

now dont be too frightened, they only last for a period of time.
then its back, yes that joyous day when they sun comes out, and the skies are clear.
but dont get too relaxed, always keep your eyes wide open for those clouds that ruined your kind day.

Author's Note

sorry for its shortness, its my first poem (on here) so i hope you like it... :)

Reviews

[CHRIS ANDES]

you have attained your goal of expressing your thoughts
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cute :)

[Aravind]

Very very descriptive!! I like that!!

Try playing around with the stanzas, just a suggestion. Maybe that cld produce a different effect on the reader..

[asdarkeyesclose]

some lovely descriptions here, the poets' cloud, a frosty place that smells like the rain. fantastic.

[Daniela May]

Why sorry? I like the shortness, it makes it nicer because inmy opinion unless they are amazing, long poems tend to drone on a bit. I love eriting them, and reading them dont get me wrong but i prefer short poems lime this. Its short and sweet, love it xx

[AmandaPanda]

I like how you described the clouds as something that we hate. But for me I love when it rains. I love how you described not only the clouds but what happens outside and inside. Great poem. :)

[Heromen Selena]

I like this one a lot. Like the description. Good job.

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Very good write! I can't wait to read more

[Ink Angel]

Nice :) says it all about the rain, although I have learned to embace it more now im older lol welldone

[SlightlyOdd]

Haha i loved this poem i find it funny because i always loved thunder storms it was nice to see this perspective