Bitter Sweet

Bitter Sweet

Still stay up thinking about you,

 no matter how many times i try to forget,
 trying to put up this brazen careless attitude and watching it fall back.
 This is me, you can't change who i am,
 once whole, now broken.
You did this to me, you set my world ablaze,
 then you left me kneeling in the embers,
 to find the remnants of my dignity.
 YOU did this to me,
 and i hope the guilt chokes you,
 until the ashes of my once whole heart,
taste acrid on your tongue,
and the grief consumes you,
drowning you in my bitter sweet blood.

Author's Note

A time in my life where i felt that my world was coming apart at the seams..

Reviews

[sinNsincerity]

This piece is one I also enjoyed, "You did this to me, you set my world ablaze,
then you left me kneeling in the embers,
to find the remnants of my dignity."

[Prosper B. Wealth]

Tough but direct.

"...drowning you in my bitter sweet blood."

Now that's a writer's weapon!

Well done!!!

[Ink Seductress]

Thank you so much!! :)

[Prosper B. Wealth]

You're welcome! Do keep up the good work.

[micky]

Beautiful and emotional. Well done:)

[Ink Seductress]

Thank you :)

[willweb]

Wow, this was quite strong but so well written. I loved the layout and the loud tone of this piece. I really enjoyed this today.

[Ink Seductress]

Thank you that means a a lot. I am glad you liked it :)