Sparkles

A Haiku poem inspired by something I saw while driving my car today.

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SPARKLES
By Airial/MsMermaid

Sun reflecting off of the
Shiny metal cars
Sparkling like bright jewels

Author's Note

Driving down the hill to go shopping I look into the college parking lot and the sun reflecting off of the cars, wet from a cloudburst just before the sun came out, inspired this Haiku. They looked like a cluster of shiny gems gleaming in the sunlight.

Reviews

[Arielle Ann]

jewels ~ the most precious stones and the glow they emit is at their best when they are crafted through nature! I loved your choice of color in creating that environment of colorful sparkles all around! what a beautiful vision you created with a mere few lines!

[Katelyn]

so simple and well written. great job (:

[The Scholar]

This was really great. The colors you used for the words were neat, but the poem would have still been wonderful without them!
And I agree with the ghost skittles guy--it takes a true writer to see something so incredibly ordinary, and yet be able to write a fantastic poem about it.
Like it. :)

[André-J-Franklin]

Love this Haiku simple yet elegant! Something you look at everyday and could possible acknowledge the beauty of it.