Winter Haiku
A Poem by
MsMermaid
Traditional form
Winter
Skies begin to gray Cloud banks quickly form Winter here, flakes fall
© 2011 MsMermaid
Reviews
The last line was brilliant!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Imagery is powerful and wonderful.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Imagery is powerful and wonderful.
I love winter! It's my favorite season! I love this haiku because in such few words you described the wonders of winter beautifully! Great piece here!
Posted 13 Years Ago
I love winter! It's my favorite season! I love this haiku because in such few words you described the wonders of winter beautifully! Great piece here!
A good, descpriptive piece, delivered with an economy of words, in true Haiku fashion. Very nicely done.
Posted 13 Years Ago
A good, descpriptive piece, delivered with an economy of words, in true Haiku fashion. Very nicely done.
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Added on November 28, 2011
Last Updated on November 28, 2011
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MsMermaid Spokane, WA
About
I've been writing poetry since I was a child, but I still have a lot to learn. I like the old fashioned rhyme and meter style of poetry, but have tried my hand at Haiku and other styles. I hope to hon..
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