A New Outlook

A New Outlook

A Poem by Ms Jessica Renee
"

Time seems to have mend the past damage.

"

Nearly been two months

Memories of us in the dust

Finally I see hope

Its in the distance

And there's no more resistance

 

I've come to learn

What it is to yearn

A spiritual high

To complete my life

And help me fly

 

I will be strong

No longer in the wrong

I will have faith

To patiently wait

And live my own way

Enjoying every day

 

There is no denying

No more crying

My fears are long gone

I don't mind being on my own

 

A new outlook

Thats what I took

As I start a new chapter

In my life's book.

© 2008 Ms Jessica Renee


Author's Note

Ms Jessica Renee
Finally I am moving on from the unexpected breakup and have learn to breathe again.

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Solid archetypal stuff. That classic human journey of breathing deep, till one can suck it up, and turn with new quiet resolve to what lies ahead, after a long time looking backward, enduring that barbed wire pang in the gut and heart.

"I don't mind being on my own" -- that's the essence of personal courage, intelligent self-regard. Then, subsequently one's relationships are based increasingly on sharing strengths, than on anxiety at being alone.

Excellent job with a very important human theme.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Poignant and brave. We all get to this point at times. Just real.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very true and understandble reality. Displaying a sense of true strength and power within you. I sympahise greatly but i have not yet reached this point and hope one day i can write with quite silent an dpowerful disregard for what once was.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pen it well. It will be your masterpiece.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the way you've written this, sincere, brief, unfussy and. the intention very clear.

You seem full of optimism and that's great.

Thanks for asking me to read, it's a pleasure.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I will seriously love and embarce this undying work of art!!! I can realte on levels creepy cause I don't even know you and i've never talked to you and yet...you've grasped my hearts concept in a single poem.
A.WORK.OF.ART!!!!!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very empowering read, the expression is strong and vibrant. Very well crafted :)




Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Solid archetypal stuff. That classic human journey of breathing deep, till one can suck it up, and turn with new quiet resolve to what lies ahead, after a long time looking backward, enduring that barbed wire pang in the gut and heart.

"I don't mind being on my own" -- that's the essence of personal courage, intelligent self-regard. Then, subsequently one's relationships are based increasingly on sharing strengths, than on anxiety at being alone.

Excellent job with a very important human theme.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Ebs
A powerful poem about hope and overcoming the pain of a break up. Wonderful.

Well done

air kisses
ebs

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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A Chaotic State of Mind, TX



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