Just Slow Me Down

Just Slow Me Down

A Poem by Ms Jessica Renee
"

There is no need to race through this.

"

A whirlwind of thoughts

Rushing and racing

Nothing but a blur

Deep inside my mind.

 

Constantly running

With no purpose

Chaotic I collide

Slowly I'm falling apart

 

Moving so fast

Spinning out of control

Feels like I could disappear

Forgetting to breathe

Yearning to live

Please save me

Just slow me down

 

Life flys by so

It feels like no where

I'm tired of running

Tired of rushing through

 

I'm just chasing time

Losing my mind

Falling out

Getting no place

 

Because I am moving so fast

Spinning out of control

Feels like I could disappear

Forgetting to breath

Yearning to live

Please save me

Just slow me down

 

Slow me down

So I can fall in love

Hear the heart call

Just please slow me down

 

Show me how

Tell me how

Just please slow me down.

© 2008 Ms Jessica Renee


Author's Note

Ms Jessica Renee
Just an inspired song written in the spur of the moment.

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This poem reminds me strongly of Sarah Brightman's ,, Deliver me ,, - the song is in my playlist if you're curious.
Anywayz, the desperation of feeling the intensity of love, with the hope to find a sense in life is expressed in a simple but very poetic manor.

A.M.


Posted 16 Years Ago


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Ms Jessica Renee
Ms Jessica Renee

A Chaotic State of Mind, TX



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I'm what you call a creative and imaginative person. For as long as I can remember, I have always been exploring the vast wonders of my thoughts and using the best of my abilities to produce a one of .. more..

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