It Finally Won

Even with a stuggle, eventually the love was born.

It kissed at the skin when blind eyed I was

Af first I paid no attention to the soft buzz

When my mind was continual abstract thinking

Cause I didn't care for the new senses arising.

 

I could feel it try to tempt out the feelings

But I didn't want any part in the dealings.

Emotions I swiftly brushed aside

Cause all the tears had already been cried

 

Fast I awoke my defenses

On alert were all the senses

My guard soon was up

But it just wouldn't give up

 

It was unclear what it really meant

Or even why it had been sent

A sweeping sensation wanting to come

And before I knew it, I had succumb

 

All I was trying to ignore

I just couldn't do no more

It soon was clear that night

No longer could I deny it

 

The desire to fight just quit

That just made me sick

Because soon I was under the spell

Aroused by its intoxicating smell

 

I couldn't deny its existence

Nor more was there resistance

All my opposition was overthrown

As love was soon born.

Author's Note

Not sure what brought this about but hopefully you like it. Would love to hear your feedback on this particular poem. I took a new approach this time.

Reviews

[These Haunted Hallways]

I have to say that this piece was brilliantly composed. All of what love tries to teach us; that we must learn from our mistakes. I believe love can either keep you and curse you, keep you and shortly spit you out, and/or keep you and accept you while it loves you forever. Well, to tell ya the truth, ive been thru the first two lol. So, i hope 3 times the charm, and someone will love me forever. I shall wait for her ;) This was very beautiful. A very smart poem. And love the pics too- funny lol!

B.A.

[Ebs]

Awww. Such a sweet poem. I love the way it rhymes. It works well and the words you use are great. They are perfectly fit into the style and topic of the poem. My fav part is:
I couldn't deny its existence
Nor more was there resistance
All my opposition was overthrown
As love was soon born.
Well done another great poem!!

ebs