Like Water

Quench the thirst.

Looming on the borders

That's where it resides

Passion and sweet ectasy

Endless just like the sea

 

Come awaken the senses

Bring about the flames

Time for it to come

Whispers want to be heard

 

Swishing, flowing

Take the journey

Rolling, wondering

Why not take the chance?

 

Rushing through

Quench this thirst

Wash over me

Water the fruits of love

 

Just like water

Like pouring rain

Flood away the pain

I need the feeling again

 

Just like water

Cascading down

Flow around

I need your love

Straight from above.

 

Like water

Flow through my veins

Like water

Give me new life.

 

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Reviews

[Ebs]

Wow. This is great, Water is like love in a lot of ways and you showed it brillantly here. I really liked this one. I liked the part:
Just like water
Cascading down
Flow around
I need your love
Straight from above.

You write really well!! Keep writing!!!!

ebs

[jumbie's #1 fan]

This is so pretty. I like how you use water as love. Very creative and unique. I'd have to say my favorite stanza would be---wait---never mind. I like them all. It's a very beautiful image.

[WordMaster]

Well done, a masterfully written poem

I particularly liked your second paragraph, the word selection is just right

Wonderful story line and exceptional use of comparison analysis

I enjoyed this read immensely

[Debbie_Philly]

So passionately beautiful my dear... I loved this !!!