How Can I Ever Be Alright?

Is it even possible when darkness quickly consumes?

Shade seems to blanket over us

Lingering whispers of our last words

How will I manage to live without you

Survive in this world on my own

 

It is indescriable, undenyable too

An ever fixed agony upon my heart

Thought I could outsmart it

But slowly I was caught in the trap

 

Snapped shut tight

Long eternal nights

Nothing feels right

How can I ever be alright?

 

I can taste the poison

Seeping fast into my soul

Toxic takes over

Flowing through my veins

 

A fever falls upon me

Pulling me under deeper

My head clouded 

Delusional I swifty become

 

Gripped so tight

Endless terror at night

I just don't feel right

Oh how can I ever be alright?

 

How can I ever be alright

With no more of you

No more love so true

How can I ever be alright

If I can't even put up a fight

Won't you please come back tonight

Author's Note

Just a spur of the moment thing, it somewhat reflects how I felt the moment I was parted from my loved one. Don't fret, it is only a temporary state of being.

Reviews

[Olivera]

This is one of the finest love poems I've read.
Thanks for sharing.

[WordMaster]

I can imagine standing at the edge of the ocean, reading this poem..
that's how powerful an imagine I believe you have created

From beginning to end, it sent a focused message to the reader

Well�done again

[Adela Muresan]

The pain is palpable in your poem, but I would suggest a more specialized language ,poetry isn't every day talk. Your ideas are worth it you know �

A.M.