Chaotic Beauty

It not just a state of mind, it's a state of life.

Going, coming

Never sure of where I'm going

Thought I couldn't live

Chaos took over me

 

Lost in confusion

With a blurred vision

Chaotic beauty

A new reason to break through

 

Pain trys to consume

Sanity wants to resume

I'm pushing boundaries

Moving all around

 

Not afraid to stand out

Scream out loud

Floating freely about

Without any kind of doubts

 

There is no rhyme or reason

Ever changing like the season

Chaotic beauty

My way of life

 

Random and true

This I promise you

Can't you just understand

My chaotic beauty

Author's Note

Chaotic Beauty is what I am and I just felt the words flow out... I just had to write.

Reviews

[Olivera]

"... I just had to write."

I'm glad you did. This is really good one. While reading it, a strong, abstract image developed in my mind.
On my humble opinion, every artist should support those states of mind by working in chosen media of expression.

[Adela Muresan]

How lovely you illustrate our imperfect character. I like your poem a lot ! Especially the pic :).

A.M.

[WordMaster]

Excellent opening, the flow of this poem is just right

I loved the 4th paragraph, very well written

Keep writing, maybe you'll get a handle on the chaos

[thejohnphenomenon]

not bad not bad. but to be honest, your choice of words were kinda childish. but still good.