Gave You The Freedom To Leave

Gave You The Freedom To Leave

A Poem by Ms Jessica Renee
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A self sacrifice.

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Looking out into nothingness

My mind is endless

Life seems meaningless

 

I never thought it would come

The day I had to let you go

You were my world

My life until now

 

I've lost all I loved

Dedicated, devoted I was

You were the one

But I couldn't have you

 

With tears in my eyes

I told my heart a lie

I just let it break

As you walked away

 

Something so beautiful died

It was a wonderful ride

But I knew you needed your space

So I put a smile upon my face

And said my goodbye

 

I simply faded away

That last day

When I gave you

The freedom to leave

© 2008 Ms Jessica Renee


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It's tuff when the one u love just walks out. It's all of the work u put into a relationship; the next thing they say goodbye. Loved ur emotions here. Ur heart spoke very clearly here.

B.A.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sometimes that is all you can do. Well said.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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