A Heart Pain...

A Heart Pain...

A Poem by Ms Jessica Renee
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A torture unexplainable.

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Losing breath with every waking step.

So afraid I just might break.

Doing my best to bring down the walls.

Only to lose grip and fall.

 

Why was I picked as its prey?

Just can't seem to find my way

An innocent victim brought down

And now only tears come around.

 

Impaired without a reason

Now I stand in blurred vision

Trying my best to just ignore 
Holding back a mournful roar

 

A halo of hope is no where insight

An endless black hole consuming

Nightmare invading the nights

With an unknown force looming.

 

There is no end to it

Not a chance at relief

It takes over quickly

Never wanting to leave

My heart's pain

 

© 2008 Ms Jessica Renee


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Ms Jessica Renee
This is still a work in progress..

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Very beautiful poem. Loved it very much. I pretty much feel this way every day. I kno, it sucks. Big Time. But, i guess, and hope things will get better for all of us who struggle as time goes onward. It's a wish we all have hehe. Great words here.

B.A.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is an emotion write here, can feel the pain, this is very well written and well expressed.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is amazing.... what a great write... i too know allot of pain and you brought me right into yours with this piece.... Well done and very well written !!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 29, 2008
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Ms Jessica Renee
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A Chaotic State of Mind, TX



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