Avowal of Ardent .1

Reliance

Nowise Will i ensky any to attain heaven,
nor be inhold of cenotaph of passion,
On no account aim to subsume all I intent.
Such onuses me seldom, I am complacent.
Withal lest I can't enclasp you often,
I befit a rendition of sorrow I reckon.

Reviews

[CD Campbell]

This reads almost like a verse from a holy book. I dont mean that in a a*s kissing or condescending way, it just has a kind of gravity to it. The words you use are erudite and otherworldly. I'm assuming by labeling this as "1", there are either more to come in the same vein or another interpretation in a different format. It's a great start to something big I think.

[Mrudula Rani]

I do identify that the adoration we feel for others has a pure and divine quality. I am delighted that you sensed it in my words. Thank you CD for your assessment, I appreciate immensely.

[Robert Trakofler]

your epitaph will be ethereal expressions on a cenotaph of paper prayers that embraces all those who witness ergo your sorrow is unfounded dear Mrudula:)

[Mrudula Rani]

It is very comforting to know that Robert dear. Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

You delve deeper and deeper dear Mrudula in the world of mystery and self. Humans build edifices only to crumble and lose meaning when replaced by another icon or idea. We are ever changing but we want to hold on to permanence. Powerful verbiage and wording.
Have a great one.

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you dear Sami for your very kind thoughts, I appreciate it truly.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly....

[Eilis]

The command of scripture or holy teachings to temper human feeling is a challenging command. Our natural impulse is to grasp and love with everything in us because of the way our love for others makes us feel so full.

When I think of my children, especially, I struggle with any idea of denying my love’s primacy, because my love for them does consume me at times.

You pose a serious question for us here in your own working out of the idea. Can we let go of the temporal to make way for the eternal? It’s the primary struggle for the eternally minded. Your words say you are determined. I admire that.

As ever, Mrudula, you offer intellectual food for thought. I do enjoy that about your work.

[Mrudula Rani]

When I read your words Eilis, I have a mental image of you ... especially when I read your writings that depict influences of your children... consistently a picture of devotion and admiration you retain for them.
" For small creatures such as we the vastness is bearable only through love"~Anne Druyan ( award winning American writer , wife of Carl Sagan) .

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahha .... ohhhhhhhhhhhhh to be enclasped often!! your fun with words gives me a fine chuckle ... we put many things on all kinds of pedestals .. holding passions in or sublimating them to cold monuments will never do eh!? long distance longing at the least melancholy ... then sad when overcome .. totally enjoyed your wordage ... and it does contain a serious emotive expression once one cuts through with a good dictionary ;))))))))))))))))))) love this Doc! so glad you posted ...
E.

[Mrudula Rani]

Your reviews are an assurance and ameliorate my writings dear E. thank you for your generous heart and tremendous knowledge. You brighten WC with presence and fellowship.

[Einstein Noodle]

totally back at ya ... i think you have a beautiful mind ... and you write stimulating poetry

[Chris Shaw]

I got a strong feeling here of a desire or wish that is not forthcoming and that leaves sorrow in its wake. I am not sure dear Mrudula whether I have interpreted your meaning as you intended. All I can tell you is what your rich and unusual language made me feel. All good wishes dear poet.

Chris

[Mrudula Rani]

Extolment of caress of loved one more than any thing in the world ... is in a way dismal. Thank you dear friend for sharing your thoughts.wishing you all the best.

[emmajoy]

' Such onuses me seldom, I am complacent..' Does that mean you want someone or... the sadness of being without?! Don't know if i want an explanation or need remain in a linguistic numbness!i#

Your extraordinary language: walks between a mysterious code and words from once upon a time. But, at the very end you add, ' I reckon' - which in that context is very 'Now. '

However you lay your words, the result seems to hang in the air, as if either teasing or creating a way of give-take or dilute. Fascinating, mysterious.

[Mrudula Rani]

" Fascinating , mysterious". Thank you for your kindness, Emmajoy you made my day. Have a wonderful weekend, dear.

[emmajoy]

Many thanks, many smiles, many blessings! Plan to have a gentle weekend although the BIG rugby match match tween England and S. Africa will be anything but gentle! Will yell on England oh so quietly, of course! Hugs you from here, smiling you happy.

[Mrudula Rani]

Wishing Good luck to team England. Have a wonderful time. Abrações ( lots of hugs back)

[emmajoy]

Thank you so very much... people laugh at my enthusiasm for the game but brothers were both players so.. this 5.3 woman loves the look of ginormous players and of course, their skills! Seriously, tho;, i love the game, love sport full stop, in fact. Sorry, must stop blathering and go into my real world, there must be a duster somewhere.. forgotten where though! :)

[Mrudula Rani]

I understand the passion for the game. Emma, whole country ( here) goes completely nuts when Brasil's national football team plays international matches.

[emmajoy]

There's something precious about a sport, whatever it is, can unite a country to such a stage.. one wishes the game or games went on for ever. Hugs you. x