Mither

Mither

A Poem by Mrudula Rani
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Tanka

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I let go many
An intent, for they did't hold
Much of quiddity
Just as advent of muse
Which is sundrily slothful.

© 2019 Mrudula Rani


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This is short but expresses well in a tight and well articulated freeverse, that feeling of having let life slip away due to inaction/lack of motivation. Oh boy do I relate!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Mrudula Rani

5 Years Ago

Thank you John, for your lovely review.
I am in love with the way you introduce me to new vocabulary that's keenly well-selected for your many excellent poems. This word blows me over today: "quiddity" . . . it's so true, we get an idea for writing but then we find it doesn't really hit the spot for us, & so many ideas slip away in this vague slothful dissatisfaction (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


Mrudula Rani

5 Years Ago

Obrigada Querida Margie, your reviews are a treat, your understanding of writers and their thoughts .. read more
barleygirl

5 Years Ago

Thank you, sweetie! I missed reading you & I'm thankful to everyone for so much caring. This time I .. read more
Mrudula Rani

5 Years Ago

You have a very positive effect on so many of us, we all love and appreciate you and care about you.. read more
Slothful Wednesday, the in-between week nearing the Friday of escape.
Wishing your life away, that's sort of slothful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

I do wish days were a little slow paced!
I dont know why I'm smiling, but I'm smiling.. guess am just glad to be back and reviewing ya... is that mither as in moaning and making a fuss about something... Neville

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

Now I'm really blushing.. bless you M.. I missed you too.. I have had a few issues, but hopefully..... read more
Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

Wishing you all the best... have faith... uma abraço bem apertado ( a big tight hug)
Neville

6 Years Ago

back at ya..... N :)

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Added on January 30, 2019
Last Updated on March 23, 2019
Tags: Muse, intent, advent, slothful


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