Mither

Tanka

I let go many
An intent, for they did't hold
Much of quiddity
Just as advent of muse
Which is sundrily slothful.

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This is short but expresses well in a tight and well articulated freeverse, that feeling of having let life slip away due to inaction/lack of motivation. Oh boy do I relate!

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you John, for your lovely review.

[barleygirl]

I am in love with the way you introduce me to new vocabulary that's keenly well-selected for your many excellent poems. This word blows me over today: "quiddity" . . . it's so true, we get an idea for writing but then we find it doesn't really hit the spot for us, & so many ideas slip away in this vague slothful dissatisfaction (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Mrudula Rani]

Obrigada Querida Margie, your reviews are a treat, your understanding of writers and their thoughts is a delightful asset to us all, you don't know how much we miss you and your (( hugs)) when you go incommunicada for very long periods . Um grande beijo.

[barleygirl]

Thank you, sweetie! I missed reading you & I'm thankful to everyone for so much caring. This time I really felt loved & this has given me a boost in my writing confidence here! *smile*

[Mrudula Rani]

You have a very positive effect on so many of us, we all love and appreciate you and care about you dear.

[Paul Bell]

Slothful Wednesday, the in-between week nearing the Friday of escape.
Wishing your life away, that's sort of slothful.

[Mrudula Rani]

I do wish days were a little slow paced!

[Neville]

I dont know why I'm smiling, but I'm smiling.. guess am just glad to be back and reviewing ya... is that mither as in moaning and making a fuss about something... Neville

[Mrudula Rani]

I was moaning and mopping about your absence and hoping you would be back soon my friend! It is just absolutely beautiful to see you back .

[Neville]

Now I'm really blushing.. bless you M.. I missed you too.. I have had a few issues, but hopefully..... N :)

[Mrudula Rani]

Wishing you all the best... have faith... uma abraço bem apertado ( a big tight hug)

[Neville]

back at ya..... N :)