Un Moored

A notion adrift,
On ocean of reflections
Impermanently, it is lost.

Reviews

[Paul Bell]

That thought you just have to get down on paper.
But it has to be done now.
But there is no paper.
You watch it disappearing.

[Mrudula Rani]

Ever so often that is the case!

[andrew mitchell]

Lovely brevity and imagery, un moored indeed a notion is.

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you dear poet.

[Neville]

There is absolutely nothing I do not just merely like about these few fine words.. Some things are just greater than the sum of their parts, and 'Un Moored' is just one such example.... N

[Mrudula Rani]

You are always very kind my friend. Thank you.

[Neville]

Always a pleasure..

[Jimmy Yetts]

Hopefully, not permanently.
Poets always imagine they've lost the best ideas.
In any event, meaningful few lines, gifted poetess!

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you. JY, you are very kind.

[CD Campbell]

Which is half of my ideas. Here one moment, gone the next. One could get lost in an ocean of reflections. Great work.

[Mrudula Rani]

Those pesky notions, they never stick around too long. The best way to hold on to them is walk around with iPhone! Thank you CD. Have a great Thursday.

[CD Campbell]

You too, Mrudula!