Truth

Senryu

My poor heart might hide
When it fails to read your mind
My eyes never lie.

Reviews

[Onlyme]

Truth can never be hidden behind sad eyes. Profoundly put and expressed.

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank very much.

[Onlyme]

Congratulations. Looking forward to reading more. From you.

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you. I appreciate your visits.

[Gee]

My second favourite part of a woman's body, after her.....
Can never not tell the truth those eyes, that's why gamblers wear shades.
Hi Mrudula, hope all is well in Brazil.

[Mrudula Rani]

I agree, eyes are the most beautiful part of human body. All is well here in Brasil.Thank you. Hope you and your family are doing well.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right my friend. The eyes never lie. Nice use of words and thought. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.

Coyote

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you john for reading and for your wonderful thoughts.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Chris Shaw]

One of those times when less is more. Well done M.

Chris

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you very much for your wonderful words Chris.

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome

[Donna]

Only a few words can say so much! This is really good!

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you very much for reading and for the review.

[Paul Bell]

Amazing how three words can convey so much.
The heart may want to ignore the truth.
But the eyes can only see.

[Mrudula Rani]

No wonder the eyes are the best features of any face.

[KCthelastboyscout]

The eyes and heart work together.the eyes see the truth.the heart accepts it.thats what I believe anyway

[Mrudula Rani]

Some times what heart fails to say or reluctant to utter eyes betray !

[barleygirl]

I love your succinct thoughts on reading someone. I agree that it's mostly impossible to read people's minds, except for when you can see the truth in his/her eyes that he/she tries to hide. I love the last line & it's an important tool in life (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you Querida Margie, your review means a lot to me . Um beijo

[Jimmy Yetts]

A true=blue Senryu.
Nicely done, M!

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you my dear poet. Uma abraço ( a hug)

[An owl on the moon]

Such a beautiful suffering. The truth, how it flows from the soul through the glorious eyes. And the drawing... poetry in lines... this is yours as well? Suas palavras e imagens são maravilhosas. Tão grato por encontrar sua poesia viva aqui. Enviando um grande abraço e um sorriso para você, precioso amiga.

[Mrudula Rani]

I have an incurable habit of doodling. Muito obrigada meu querido amigo para sua visita. Uma surpresa muito agradável. um bom fim de semana para você. Grande abraço.

[An owl on the moon]

I deeply appreciate your words... and your doodles. Always. E feliz pelo tempo para compartilhar com você aqui. Um fim de semana feliz agora com certeza. Abraços doces e paz para você, precioso amiga.

[Mrudula Rani]

Muito obrigada. Tudo de bom para você querido.