Two sides of a coin

Two sides of a coin

A Poem by Mrudula Rani
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Haiku

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Shades of me vary
Some bright as sun, some somber
Sees tears on and on!

© 2018 Mrudula Rani


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Do we even have “senryu” in our options drop down list. I didn’t see it, but I may be wrong. If not “haiku” is the choice writers would select.

Thanks for the write!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

We do not have senryu in our options drop down list. Thank you for reading.
I am also a roller coaster of ups & downs, but it’s becuz I’m bipolar. I try to remind myself it’s just a mood & it will pass. Your succinct description follows the 17-syllable rule while delivering a realistic panorama of how feelings can run the range. Haiku & senryu are two forms that have the same syllable rules, but here’s the difference – haiku is about nature, while senryu is about human nature (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

Querida Margie, I went by the information that nature combined with human nature can serve as subj.. read more
barleygirl

6 Years Ago

You did nicely combine the two . . . *smile*
Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

Thank you for reminding me, some times an advice from dear friend is very helpful. uma grande abra�.. read more
Where there is happiness, there will also be a time for sadness. Where there are sunbeams, there will also be a time for raindrops. There will always be two sides of a coin. Lovely Haiku, here Mrudula Rani.

Much appreciated by this reader

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

Thank you Chris for your wonderful review, it's beautiful, I appreciate it very much.
Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

You are very welcome.
Heads you win, tails I lose.... that's just the way it tiz, I suppooose..... nice lil haiku by a lovely lil poet....N

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

Heads or tails in my book you are always the winner. Thank you dear friend.
Both sides of the coin must have some worth of their own somehow. I guess it's up to us to decide.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

Whatever images the coin bears on its sides the denomination is a fixed value.
Thank you for.. read more
When one is intelligent, complex and creative, the personality has many facets.
Insightful piece, M!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

Thank you dear JY. I treasure your review.

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Added on May 18, 2018
Last Updated on May 19, 2018
Tags: Shade, somber, sun, tears


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