Heaven

Tanka

Soft kiss, warm embrace,
Excites, invites me to place
my face on your chest.
You seem to guard in your heart
my heaven and peace of mind!

Author's Note

Drawing by Mrudula.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Your poem is wondrous, as is your drawing. There is beauty and love in each that feeds the other. And yes, it is heaven to be anywhere pressed to your lover, breathing in the blessed peace of love. Sua poesia é sempre linda, cheia de tudo, profunda e doce sobre a vida. Eu espero que seu mundo viva ao seu redor como poesia hoje. Enviando um grande abraço, minha poeta precioso.

[Samuel Dickens]

Your romantic words are made even stronger your very effective, lovely drawing. Love really can feel like heaven.

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you for your wonderful comments.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Softly romantic and sweet, I enjoyed your words here. Bless.

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you for reading, I appreciate your comments.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

thanks for your lovely sweet poem that you entered into romantic contest.
still going through over 32 submissions may take some time
thanks again good luck!

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you very much.

[KCthelastboyscout]

The feeling you describe is the reason why people want to be loved and why it hurts so much when it's taken away

[Mrudula Rani]

I understand your sentiments, I hope you'll find someone who appreciates you and adores you KC.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Lovely, passionate and devotional.
Sounds like a lucky guy!

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you JY, for your wonderful comments.

[Chris Shaw]

The drawing is beautiful and goes extremely well with the words of your tanka. Loving and full of warmth. Such an uplifting little read.

Thank you

Chris

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you chris, your wonderful words are much appreciated.

[Chris Shaw]

You are very welcome.

[sette]

a very romantic write and a beautiful drawing too

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you sette, I appreciate your sweet words.

[barleygirl]

Love your drawing, which is perfect for this intimate loving message! I love the way you paint this private moment with your affectionate & smoothly rhyming riff. I absolutely LOVE putting my face on a favorite chest! *mmmmm!* Fondly, Margie

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you Querida Margie, I loved your lovely comments. You always make me ( us all) feel wonderful with your brilliant reviews. Um beijo

[Neville]

What a super warm and uplifting tanka.....a devotion, if ever there was........lucky chest, I say..... N

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you dear friend for your warm wonderful comments. I appreciate them as always.

[Neville]

always a sincere pleasure....N