Karma

Personal beliefs

I do not believe in heaven or hell!
It is now and here that's all,
Sometimes we do give or gather
more than our due or Share
An interest on loan, or savings of sorts
For an after life or two
That follows us; the karma!

Reviews

[Paul Bell]

Where do we go when we die.
Should we get buried with our treasure?
If I was good, do I get the best cloud?
Just got this feeling when I enter the pearly gates, a tax bill awaits me.

[Mrudula Rani]

Your review is a perfect poem in itself. I will tell you what ...if I go first I will find out answers to all you questions and will let you know.

[Paul Bell]

Text me on the celestial phone. lol

[Mrudula Rani]

Why? A personal visit might scare you?

[Paul Bell]

Are you allowed to leave the place.
You coming back as an apparition.

[Mrudula Rani]

May be as an angel!

[Neville]

I am a great believer & with these words, you certainly do the concept such justice. I am conscious that there is much misunderstanding and many myths surrounding this very basic tenant. I am also very glad that you Mrudula penned it for us..........N

[Mrudula Rani]

I will keep your kind words in my heart. Most of thinkers do doubt the concept of hell and heaven.my simple mind sort of penned those into a poem. Thank you my dear friend for reading it. Abraço

[Neville]

No worries, always a pleasure.....

[mou]

true..specially love the line "Sometimes we do give or gather more than our due .....!"
a very serious thing is presented with so much of interesting turns..completely creative work..beautiful.
mou.

[Mrudula Rani]

You are very kind. I appreciate your review and thank you very much. All the best

[mou]

thanks much and my pleasure :)