Partners

Partners

A Poem by Mrudula Rani

He reads love in my eyes
My warm touch he knows

His home is in my heart
His lips on mine speak soft

Life is nothing but beautiful art
Together a masterpiece we create!!

© 2018 Mrudula Rani


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mmmmmmmmmmmm delightful read...warm, compassionate and loving ... in just three little couplets .. i am inspired to greet life today with a song on me lips, and dance in me feet and the rainbow in me mind ;) i need such positive attitude as we are having 4 adults over for dinner today and i am by nature an introvert and cherish quiet time more than crowds ;) i see your couple in full embrace dancing, twirling in a ballroom of bliss .. love should be that way more often eh!? sure enjoyed the read ... and great pic by the way
E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

I am an introverte too, love writing then speaking. I hope you will have wonderful time with your d.. read more
Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

thank you so much Mrudula!! my Norma does all the cooking and she has all of it ready already ... ;).. read more
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You don’t need line after line of gushing adoration to bear your soul and express your love as you have shown here. Beautiful.
The very last letter of your writing seems to have taken a hike !!! ( e)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

Thank you. your rare visits are a treasure!
And also for bringing back the letter from the.. read more
Gee

6 Years Ago

Apologies, I am pretty much useless when it comes to reviewing, which is a poor excuse as I myself g.. read more
Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

I love your brilliant remarks. No apologies necessary, I appreciate your reviews whenever I receive... read more
This is so very beautiful in it's truth & simplicity! I've never had this experience in life with a human, but I do have it every day with my pets. These are universal sensations of connection expressed with such clarity & emotion! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

Querida Margie, loved your review. I have been married since I was 18 to a wonderful ( an absent mi.. read more
barleygirl

6 Years Ago

To get a glimpse into such a relationship really helps me fill a void that's been there all my life!.. read more
A creation of love.
Does it get any better than that.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

No it doesn't! Thank you.
I love the thinking behind this .... your shared love creating a masterpiece. And I love the way you say so much in just six lines. Lovely to read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

Thank you dear Great Astri, I love your style of writing very much, gentle, and lovely writing of yo.. read more
Great Aunt Astri

6 Years Ago

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Added on February 15, 2018
Last Updated on November 2, 2018
Tags: lips, Love, heart


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