Infatuation

FEELINGS LIKE A FIREBALL
BURNING WITHOUT CONTROL
IT'S HARD TO MAINTAIN COMPOSURE
WHEN MY HEART GETS ON A ROLL
HESITATION AND UNCERTAINTY
ARE JUST A BEAT AWAY
PERHAPS ITS BETTER LEFT UNMENTIONED
WHAT I WISH TO SAY
IF KNOWLEDGE IS THE ONLY FOOD
THAT FEEDS A HUNGRY MIND
THEN I WILL TAKE JUST WHAT I'VE SOUGHT
AND THAT WILL BE JUST FINE!

Author's Note

I stopped using punctuation marks, as each reader will interpret what they read, uniquelyy

Reviews

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The flow was awesome Amanda:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[abluehorseandflowers]

I like the rhyme and rhythm and "perhaps its better left unmentioned" strikes me as accurate. May I suggest that the clarity of mention in this poem is what is missing for me.