Carve My HeartA Poem by Mrs.Sophrosyne6/13/10 part of a poetry compilation "on addiction" for a Creative Writing course I took this past year. (Title image by
Confessing all thats broken
And watch the healing come Forgive all that's spoken Try to feel although you're numb You can go on staring My feelings won't change You've beaten me down too many time For me to rise up again You have hurt me for the last time I won't lie down and take this any longer Get out of my head And crave your way out of my heart It still bleeds for you Forgive all my words And I'll go on hating you I've tired of fighting against the current Against the surge of waves Forgive all my sins And let the rain wash away your stain
© 2010 Mrs.SophrosyneAuthor's Note
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Added on August 22, 2010 Last Updated on August 29, 2010 AuthorMrs.SophrosyneCAAboutPlease read and review, I'd really like the feed back to improve my writing. And grammatical, spelling, or other errors, please let me know. Thank you! “Stephen kissed me in the spring, Rob.. more..Writing
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