Always Have My Heart

7/15/2010

I can’t believe it’s real

These feelings that I feel

They keep me up half the night

I can’t help it that if feels so right

So right to be so close to you

So right, and it feels so true

But if you start to drift away

And you tell me there’s nothing left to say

If you find someone new

It’ll hurt but I’ll get through

I’ll let you be free

I’ll know you don’t love me

And I won’t let you see me cry

Even if inside I die

Because I only want the best for you

And I’ll wish you luck in all you do

So even if our paths do part

Know you always have my heart 

Author's Note

Reviews please, I would like to know what you think!

Reviews

[Papaya]

Sweet poem. : )

[absolutefolie]

I can really relate to this. Lovely poem, well done :)

[David W Moore III]

True love is wnting the bestfor another even at our own expense. Beautifully put. Simple. Straightforward. From the heart. What could be more powerful?

[sammyj]

really good, I like this

[Crowley]

Lyrical for sure, reads like the chorus to a great song. I like the pace and flow and the rhyming works. Nice work, I liked it.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a true pouring of a true heart into a sincere poetic form~ lovely

[.quan.011.]

Nice peom, very sweet.

[Aven]

Very heartfelt. :)

[Ramiz Ilham Khan]

I like the simplicity of it. Its very straight, upright and just. Its generous in a universal way. :-)

[FocusedAmnesia]

Touching topic. I'm not really a fan of things that rhyme, but this was a pretty smooth read.