I Bleed

i cut

and let it bleed.

because i hope that it will flow out

like a river flows out to the ocean

i hope that maybe

these feelings will stop

that i will actually let go

that he will be a memory

it still is not easy

and it hasnt been easy

because i think i fell in love with him

and he doesnt even respond

his life goes on

and im just stuck

so i cut and let it bleed

hoping it will finally come out

Reviews

[CourtniRenee]

Feelings build and build and a lot of the times we let them out is unhealthy and harmful to ourselves. You capture the desperation and the sorrow of heartbreak very well here, everything feels so real.
I really hope that you are doing okay, and that you have everything you need to move on.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i would hope it would metaphorically cut...
there are intense feelings here.
j.