Waving goodbye

26th of august 2010
the day god took you for a hand to lend
I miss you even though you drove me around the bend,
He took the best angel there could possibly be
I knew you were an angel,
from the day you first cuddled me
you're now out of pain and misery
and what lies under my smile is a mystery
I get told to put on a brave face
because it's the simplest way to embrace
I hope one day I wake up,
this was all a dream
because this feeling is getting way beyond extreme
in the letter you wrote me
you said not to grieve
but I swear that word is just make believe
How dare you leave my side
just as I was on a bumpy ride
when I needed you most
you turned into a ghost
now i'm waving goodbye
tear drops stroll down my cheek
people begin to think i'm a freak
but they dont know why i'm hurting this way
and memories are starting to rot like decay
just remember how much you mean to me,
while your living happy and freely
the pain is begining to show
as i'm feeling so damn low
How dare you leave my side
just as I was on a bumpy ride
when I needed you most
you turned into a ghost
now i'm waving goodbye

Reviews

[Just me]

This is filled with so much emotion, it's great.

[KeeD]

Such an honest poignant write. "pats you on the back" you did really good with this piece :) It had good flow and word choice that enabled good timing on rhyme.
The best part about it is, it's like a letter filled with emotion, posted to a destination far beyond human reach. I was drawn in from the beginning to the very end and I felt that emotion you wanted me to feel through this piece. Great write.