A moment forever

 

 A dreamy story, a dreamy day,

A dreamy moment takes all away.

Who cares for a moment, when forever is there?

Wait and wonder, stop and stare…

Forever is endless, forever is here

How many moments are hidden there?

A short forever, a moment for years

A moment forever, forever of cries…

A dreamy story, a dreamy day,

A moment… forever takes all away…

Reviews

[Horizons]

Right!

This`s life.... where either you live whole or just cry aloud for all, no one or nothing`s "endless". Every moment`s meant to be lived... to beloved, no matter what. I kinda like the taste you`ve got! It`s a bit sweet... a wee bit sour... very cold... & a little bit bold. Nice. Liked your work. Your poetry has got much depth behind words. Moreover, you speak much through your "shorty" writes which`s love `bout your spectacular breath (creative art).

Keep writing poetry in the same pattern you`re on it. It`s worth-reading.. with a great cup of time.

[lovergirl]

what i understood is that you're either talking about life and how we're living it or about the memories and souvenirs we're making , both ways i loved this piece , it's inlighting and beautiful and so much meaningful ;)

[SleeplessVolcano]

Beautifully written! We have so much time - even though we claim that time flies....we need to grab hold of this moment, until it turns into forever. Ask someone with a few months to live, and they know the meaning of how to make the most of every day......sometimes we only start to value the commodity of time when it is taken away.......

[Helena]

Thank you))