Just A Moment

Just A Moment

A Poem by Mr. Lopez

I'll need just a moment....
Or perhaps I may need three
Eventually I'm sure
I'll be back to being me

I'll need just a moment
Or maybe two or four
No wait.....I think
I'll need a moment more

I'm really really close I think
I'm almost fine ,I'm on the brink
Perhaps by moment number six
By then I'll find my perfect fix

If not I'll wait for moment eight
By then I should be feeling great
What if it takes 'till moment nine
Before I'm finally feeling fine?

I've lost my count with all this fun
I'm back to moment number one
I'll need just a moment....

© 2016 Mr. Lopez


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We could all do with a few more moments like these. Wonderfully captured my friend.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice flow of thoughts leading to the beginning. I liked the thoughts and the wants of the poetry. Thank you Mr. Lopez for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You clever little devil you!! LOVE this piece!! I'm mad I didn't think of it first!! Well done!! Perfect flow, AWESOME amount of wit, and I love the meaning of it!!
High five!!
Tabby

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mr. Lopez

8 Years Ago

You're too cool Tabby. Thanks for the nice review and comments.glad you liked it.
Tabby Mac

8 Years Ago

My pleasure and I LOVED IT!

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Mr. Lopez
Mr. Lopez

Phoenix, AZ



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