Just A Moment

I'll need just a moment....
Or perhaps I may need three
Eventually I'm sure
I'll be back to being me

I'll need just a moment
Or maybe two or four
No wait.....I think
I'll need a moment more

I'm really really close I think
I'm almost fine ,I'm on the brink
Perhaps by moment number six
By then I'll find my perfect fix

If not I'll wait for moment eight
By then I should be feeling great
What if it takes 'till moment nine
Before I'm finally feeling fine?

I've lost my count with all this fun
I'm back to moment number one
I'll need just a moment....

Reviews

[FIN]

Such a fun and silly poem, that I much enjoyed.

Oh when the undesirable feelings creep in!

The ending made it such a lighter topic.

Well done.

[Mr. Lopez]

Hey, thanks for stopping by.glad you liked it.

[DMS_Dana]

I love the flow and the rhythm of the poem.
It was a fun read.
Thank you

[Mr. Lopez]

Hey,thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment. It's always appreciated. Glad you liked it.

[mattavelli]

Hello, Mr. Lopez! :)
This was a fun read with great rhythm. It reminded me a bit of dr suess.

[Mr. Lopez]

Funny you should say that because in the past I've told people that perhaps I read too much Dr. Seuss as a kid. Thanks for stopping by.

[mattavelli]

Then you know about tweetle beetles. Haha.

[Gee]

Indeed, sometimes a moment or two( or more) make a whole world of difference. Nicely done Mr L

[ReedWrite]

Love this!
So true...how many times have we just needed a few moments...counted to 10...only to start at one again. You penned it perfectly.

[Mr. Lopez]

Thank you so much. That is EXACTLY how this poem was composed. How many times have we just needed a moment to collect ourselves only to find out that we needed a moment more? Thank you for stopping by.

[shade]

i like it, good write but i found it a little hard to follow

[Mr. Lopez]

I welcome all opinions. Thank you for reading.

[*]

A funny poem I welcome on this day. tfs.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Repetitious we are in nature...nice Lil diddy!

[D Connolly]

Brings a smile to my face. Totally relatable :)

[Mr. Lopez]

Some days are crazier then others am I right? Thanks for stopping by.

[Jack Necron (Aubrey Jac..]

This perfectly captures the motions of being unsure of oneself and not being ready to face what's coming. I also liked the connective loop at the end to the beginning. Nice work.

[Mr. Lopez]

And round and round we go at times. Glad you liked it. Thanks for reading.