What the.....

The thin of that is that of then
The thick of this is where
The that of this is almost here
When this of that was there
The who of why was nearly where
The why of who was when
Around the who is always where
The that of this was then
And if you knew the who was by
The why was over here
Well then you'd know I'm so confused
But then again that's clear

Reviews

[Hebe]

very clever ! I like your style.

[Mr. Lopez]

Thank you Hebe, this poem was actually very difficult for me to complete. Over the course af several years, yes years, I wrote many drafts of it . Deciding on just how much confusion to include was a hurdle . There were drafts that were just too confusing and it took a while to decide on this final draft. It was hard earned but well worth my efforts. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

[Tabby Mac]

How clever and fun!! I'm enjoying your poems very much! The rhythm as well as the thought!

[Mr. Lopez]

Tabby Mac , you just made my day. I wrote and rewrote this poem so many times I lost count. Composing confusion isn't as easy as it sounds but your reaction and review was worth every minute I spent writing it. Thank you so very much