Our Last Duet

The harmony we materialized is long gone,
the remains are hidden beneath the carpet.

Songs of daylight and love, were shared ,
and flowers would blossom as the songs spread.

Sometimes..I check underneath the carpet,
for the last remains of our last duet.

Author's Note

This poem is on my blog:
http://www.poetrylocker.com/our-last-duet/
comments and critique are welcome on the blog.

Reviews

[Denham Cole]

Well, I can see that you're wanting to say 'something', but not much is coming through.
To be kind, this poem never really gets off the floor (pardon the pun). I really think you need to apply more time in developing the write. You seem like an earnest writer, so keep up the work.

[MrKnowAll]

Thank you very much for your review. As much as I want to give out details in poem, sometimes I prefer to leave it magical and only allow my self to really know what the meaning is.

But for some reason , I do consider this poem to be a simple one.