A Man's Mending Offer

I want to get on my knees ,
say that I'm sorry for all that I have done.

I want to lean my ear to your chest,
hear your heartbeat race,
then whisper in your ear:
I love you.

I want to live an immortal life with you ,
until , until the sun's fuel is over ,
and we turn into ashes of space.

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Reviews

[PP]

A poem of devotion! Takes a lot to write with such dedication :)

[MrKnowAll]

Why thank you very much :)

[PP]

My pleasure :)