You're My Bella Luna

For the sweetest girl. :)

Sitting on a breakwater,
it was a bliss to be with you.

As Aries, Aquarius and the Moon watch over us, 
Our hands met.
Yours tender,
full of affection.
Palm to palm,
we locked hands.

Your touch sent my heart messages of love.

I shuffled closer to you,
wrapped my arms around you
and softly sang...
"I'm just a singer, you're the world
All I can bring you
Is the language of a lover
Bella Luna, my beautiful beautiful moon
How you swoon me like no other..."

Your giggles made my day.
Your innocent smile sent me butterflies.

Our eyes met.
Yours were of pearls,
beautiful and majestic.
I gazed upon them
as time stopped for a moment.

As waves tumbled below us,
our feet, full of water and sand,
flirted with each other.

You stood up, dancing to the rhythm of the waves.
You were a symphony.
The waltz made me teary with the emotions portrayed.

To know you, in itself is a blessing,
To be with you, is indescribable.

You are my Bella Luna.

Take a bow my sweet heart.
You have the whole universe in awe.

Author's Note

It will be sweet of you to write a little review for my poem. :)
Cheers!

Reviews

[Keriun]

WOW. Really, It's the best of yours :D I LOVE IT. There's nothing wrong I noticed lol. But "I'm just a singer, you're the world
All I can bring you
Is the language of a lover" seems a bit too familiar. Hmm.

I loved "
You stood up, dancing to the rhythm of the waves.
You were a symphony.
The waltz made me teary with the emotions portrayed."

and

"Our eyes met.
Yours were of pearls,
beautiful and majestic."
This one caught me by surprise. Hahah, didn't expect you to write this :b

WELL DONE D00D x)

[An owl on the moon]

What a beautiful vastness you create, the whole universe as an audience to your love and joy. There is a tenderness here that is deep, vividly painted with the softest strokes. Wonderful!

[Closed Account]

Wow, this is amazing. It is so sweet. Whoever you wrote this for is so lucky! My favorite line was probably: Take a bow my sweet heart.
You have the whole universe in awe.
This is beautifully written. Great job! :)

[LisetteCanWrite!]

An amazing tribute to love with passion that rivals the earth and heavens above.. written freely from the heart of one so young and full of life.. this was brilliant and well-penned. I loved the lines:

As Aries, Aquarius and the Moon watches over us,
Our hands met.
Yours tender,
full of affection.
Palm to palm,
we locked hands.

This was filled with emotions and done so intelligently in the process.. stroking intellect as well as the simple complexities of young love.. the elements you have woven in are priceless for readers for all ages. Excellent work!

[faris]

woaah, another epic poem!
tsk, why do you always write great poems? hahaha
anyway, i love this, especially the "To know you, in itself is a blessing,
To be with you, is indescribable." part. haha, woooooo, nice one ardy! :D