You're My Bella Luna

For the sweetest girl. :)

Sitting on a breakwater,
it was a bliss to be with you.

As Aries, Aquarius and the Moon watch over us, 
Our hands met.
Yours tender,
full of affection.
Palm to palm,
we locked hands.

Your touch sent my heart messages of love.

I shuffled closer to you,
wrapped my arms around you
and softly sang...
"I'm just a singer, you're the world
All I can bring you
Is the language of a lover
Bella Luna, my beautiful beautiful moon
How you swoon me like no other..."

Your giggles made my day.
Your innocent smile sent me butterflies.

Our eyes met.
Yours were of pearls,
beautiful and majestic.
I gazed upon them
as time stopped for a moment.

As waves tumbled below us,
our feet, full of water and sand,
flirted with each other.

You stood up, dancing to the rhythm of the waves.
You were a symphony.
The waltz made me teary with the emotions portrayed.

To know you, in itself is a blessing,
To be with you, is indescribable.

You are my Bella Luna.

Take a bow my sweet heart.
You have the whole universe in awe.

Author's Note

It will be sweet of you to write a little review for my poem. :)
Cheers!

Reviews

[mmzx]

"I'm just a singer, you're the world
All I can bring you
Is the language of a lover"

Gee, i wonder where that came from.
:P
hahah nice work RD!

[Katie Louise Hughes]

This is so beautiful. I can't imagine it being any more sweeter. You're a fantastic writer, and wish I would have read your poems earlier. Beautiful!!!!! Thanks for the write, and keep it up! :D

[J.Black]

As Aries, Aquarius and the Moon watches over us,
Our hands met.
Yours tender,
full of affection.
Palm to palm,
we locked hands.

Those words just there drew me in and made the rest of this poem so damn magical. You're awesome.


"Bella Luna"... can't get any prettier than that, my friend.

[Stacey Watts]

Very beautiful work. I like the romantic feel to this. Very well written and expressive.

[deeps]

This is a very lovely write.
I like this.

[Chelsea]

this poem is beautiful :) love it

"To know you, in itself is a blessing,
To be with you, is indescribable"

love it

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this is very beautiful... i wish someone felt like this for me

[DearWorld]

Bella Luna, my beautiful beautiful moon
How you swoon me like no other..."

Love it! You're imagery is beautiful.

[Audrey Joanne]

As waves tumbled below us,
our feet, full of water and sand,
flirted with each other.


ARDY. I LOVE IT A LOT A LOT A LOT!

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. Written with skill and heart. You are a very good writer. I'm glad to meet you. Keep it up. Your poetry is a pleasure to be able to read.
Coyote