Infinity

Flaming infinity in my heart
Embers floating in atmospheric turmoil
Not a chaos of angst but more of wonder
Of which a poets eye would compose

beautiful artistry....

Conflagration consuming space but not destroying
Surrounding and amassing

                  Swirling, dancing yet not devouring

Heat and love, light and joy

They entwine and I delight

                  Ascending, rising, painting not with ash
                            and burns and scars
                      but with emotion
              passion and enchantment

----Bottomless, limitless, eternal,

Bliss; this is infinity.

Author's Note

RE: Infinity carrots.

Reviews

[Michael X]

this poem proves that there are diamonds on this site, perhaps a diamond in the rough because although this is phenomonally crafted, the mastery is
blurred in some places like
Flaming infinity in my heart" any time i see the words flaming and heart together so early in a poem on top of that... it gives me an unsatisfaied depth
because the term is so played out. this poem would have to be spotless
and then some.. you are touching the skies of talent,
keep going the way you are and you will be flying through the skies.
another thing is the overwording, and too many details
its a mouthful to ponder.. awsome job on form, but the rest didnt give enough
credence to the brilliant form to support it. thats just my opinion, you are an excellent poet, keep it up

[darkgurl]

I thought this was very well written and very beautiful.
I like the set up of this write as well.