Rush of Truth

This is the sound of life passing by

This is the taste of knowing a lie

This is why seeing is never believing

The words you hear

                Won't bring you near

The feeling that hope is leaving

Reviews

[Mr Whiskers]

Ah, but Lilith thats why its called a 'rush' of truth. Have you ever known something as truth, then one day find out....well, its complete bullshit and everything you held in context with it is now deflated and ruined? This is my moment of ruin. Succinctly.

[Lilith]

It's a good start for a good poem, but that's just what it is: A start. Some poems can be that short and be full of meaning and wonder, but this is not one of them. Add more, think more, and try again!
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