Sight

Sight

A Poem by Mr Whiskers

Reaching, seeking, needing
Not knowing what you'll find
Flooding, brooding, bleeding
Taken aback by complex design
Seeing, stirring, knowing
Washed over and out of wack
Calming, feeling, soothing
Regain control, take yourself back
Unify in high compliance
with what you already know
Shy at looking back again,
too much we never show
Questions now abound
as we seek to understand
Balking at the experience
at once so out of hand
At the same time yearning
just to clarify
Did you feel what I just saw
I trust you not to lie
Close your eyes, cut it off
Dont let them all infect
Some disease we feel and know
and yet cannot detect
My friend you possess the key
to those doors that dont exist
In a tunnel with just one opening
Be careful with this gift

 

© 2009 Mr Whiskers


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"Did you feel what I just saw" "I trust you not to lie" It would seem that you possess the gift. I have been trying to open a few of those doors only to have them slam shut on my fingers. I still have the key and maybe someday I will try again. I cannot tolerate confusion. Very interesting read. I love words that make me think.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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"Did you feel what I just saw" "I trust you not to lie" It would seem that you possess the gift. I have been trying to open a few of those doors only to have them slam shut on my fingers. I still have the key and maybe someday I will try again. I cannot tolerate confusion. Very interesting read. I love words that make me think.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Mr Whiskers
Mr Whiskers

New Albany, IN



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I'm 22yrs old, a redheaded female living in southern Indiana. I have a 5yr old daughter Ellie and 3yr old daughter Emma, and my life is getting better now that I have returned to the Love of my life. .. more..

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