Ache

Ache

A Poem by Mr Whiskers

 

The ache
It burns slowly through
Etching a silhouette, you
In my heart, my soul
My energy is twisted
like wind chimes in a storm
How to untangle
thin lines such as this
So breakable...
Tension
Eating at my nerves
Licking open the wounds again
Cant keep my tongue in my head
Shut up already

Listen only to the silence
Believe me
it will come...

Promise
broken, forgotten by dawn
Hurt
lingers, uncertain again
Love
in this unknown state
The ache
Oh, the ache
It spreads and grows
Expanding in my heart
Will I burst or die trying?

© 2008 Mr Whiskers


Author's Note

Mr Whiskers
Just words, what more do you want today?

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I like the elaborate description of the inner hurt caused by the immortal supreme theme of love. You make the pain almost real in your words.

A.M.


Posted 16 Years Ago



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Mr Whiskers
Mr Whiskers

New Albany, IN



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I'm 22yrs old, a redheaded female living in southern Indiana. I have a 5yr old daughter Ellie and 3yr old daughter Emma, and my life is getting better now that I have returned to the Love of my life. .. more..

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