Awake, Anew, the Story of You

Awake, Anew, the Story of You

A Poem by Justin
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Completely changed its original aim from spiritual, to new life.

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Born anew, life from the womb. Awake to sunshine from skylines surround. Looking to smiles of bright warm faces, while winds of freedom leave softening traces.

Can you feel it?

The beat of new life, in your hands. Your protection is what they'll need, the love of woman and of man.

© 2013 Justin


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I like your concept, but I do feel like you've limited yourself a little by making it so short. I think there's a great deal of potential with this topic and you could expand on this a great deal, but if you want to keep it like this, that's your decision.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Love your poem and you said so much with just a few lines...enjoyed and liked the title too Justin...SyberRose

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like your concept, but I do feel like you've limited yourself a little by making it so short. I think there's a great deal of potential with this topic and you could expand on this a great deal, but if you want to keep it like this, that's your decision.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 21, 2013
Last Updated on February 21, 2013
Tags: Life, Birth, Awakening, Love

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Justin
Justin

Sandusky, OH



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Hmm... 19 years I've been alive, but only really lived these past few.. I'm a freshman at the University of Akron majoring in Environmental Science. I don't like to think about my past, so I strive to.. more..

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