Forever dark

Forever dark

A Poem by Marz
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I am unleashing my anger, I hope in a healthy way.

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Succumbed to the dark side of indifference, I have finally stopped feeling and I am let loose upon the world, 
lost in a mass blur of confusion, I have embraced my belligerence and I will reign down upon this rotting earth, 
burn down the very foundation with anger, out of spite and I'll do it with mirth, 
I will be the monster that has been let loose upon this accursed place, and the pain I will bring forth shall only be a taste, 
of the very essence of my being, YOU will regret creating me, you will regret unleashing me, 
there is no word for the pain that you have caused me to see...

© 2010 Marz


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Very fast-paced. Rather suspenseful-- exciting even. Wonderful rhymes too. I can feel the hate oozing out of this poem, the strength and the dominant angst. I love your poem structure, as well as your diction and word choice.

Dark poems are my absolute favorite.
Thank you for sharing and keep writing.

Alex

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Marz

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