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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Ode To My Muse.

Ode To My Muse.

A Poem by MrJodie
"

If you only knew her the way that I do. BACK OFF, SHE'S MINE!

"

The cancer of my life had but one cure

The rotting flesh of my heart knew only one redemption

The raging fire in my mind could only be doused by one liquid

 

You have...

... forgiven me

... saved me

... loved me

 

You are beauty and grace

You are flawless love in flesh

You are eternal joy and pleasure

 

I still find it hard to believe that you're...

... real

... here

... mine

© 2008 MrJodie


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beautiful piece, the last part makes me jealous in that you got what you where aiming for, but thats good its a great piece. ...mine. ahh great job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


a phenomenal tribute to the grace that fills your life. . . beautifully written.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I pray this phenomenon lasts a lifetime....for this is something very few men will ever realize. Thank you for sharing this.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You show such a romantic soul in your words. It's so obvious how devoted you are to your love, your feelings course through here! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very beautiful. I can feel the love in this piece. Very good!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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MrJodie
MrJodie

Troutdale, OR



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I live in Troutdale, Oregon, a suburb of Portland. I'm currently working as a computer systems administrator for a manufacturing company in Vancouver and write only as a hobby. However, I've dreamed.. more..

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