Your Piece pt 2

This is in response to her response to Your Piece pt1. It may be a little confusing cause I didn't place her response on her, but I believe the point should still be clear.

I'm going to trust my pen to convey

What I'm feeling within.

Even with God in my life loneliness

Is my constant companion.

I recently lost sight of the fact that

God would place in my life an individual

Completing companion.

Cause I'm the "having my heart broke" champion.

My heart turned cold, and my furnace of revenge

I feed more coal

My inner flame arose and many were left in the cold.

Bold were your steps to bask in my warmth.

I accepted your advance and made a spot for you.

Front and center of my pain and anguish,

So that you could avoid those hurdles

And experience all of my love.

I long to experience the same in return.

You posed a question;

"Could you give all of me without doing to much?"

Oh how that questions burns.

It's impossible for you to give me too much,

When your main focus is your child from another mans seed.

I would as I should always be second place.

But no matter what you'll always have a constant

Reminder of that mans face.

It sort of put me in my place

Cause I erased my face and God in your life replaced.

Sigh...

Your womanly curves could have me satisfied for life.

Would I be able to do the same for you?

Wondering about other chicks I would f**k,

Would drive you insane

Like me trying to figure out all the dicks you sucked.

I don't have the urge to cheat if my woman is satisfying me

Between the sheets.

I would be more concerned about hurting you

And causing you to weep.

No matter how bright the star there are some depths

And dark places the light just cant reach.

So I say shine on and let me polish

Myself to be a reflection of you.

Would you do the same for me?

If and when my anger erupts everyone will see.

Baffled as to why people want to see the worst in me,

When all I want to give is the best in me.

I want people to recognize the God in me.

A God that doesn't speak,

But communicates with those who choose to see.

Author's Note

I think to fully graps where these emotions stem from refernce my piece Future Ruler, I think it would clarity.

Reviews

[Celeste21]

This one kind of made me sad.. About the child that has the face of a man from a previous relationship, and you feeling as if your second place. If I did become involved w/ another man I wouldn't see him as coming second place. Yes, the love for my daughters and the love I would have for a lover are completely different, but they can manage to also be on the same wave length if he deems himself worthy. Of course, all parents put their children's needs above all else, including themselves, but that doesn't have to take away from a current relationship. It could give you guys common ground. Something you both work to be the best at.