SideKick Moment 04.23.09

Just walking around talking to myself and this is what came of that conversation (does that make me crazy?)

 

Celibacy is just not an option
See cause if your not giving it up
Then at the very next CLEAN troth
I’m stopping,
Cause my Horse needs watering
I’m your Chef and your Waiter
I’ll take your order
So come closer and whisper
In my ear
Sweet words to draw our orbits near
Have no fear
When our worlds Collide
Your anatomy was made for me to fit
Right there inside
Your Milky Way
The Brightest stars are your eyes
Only those who can with stand the glare
Will receive love without compromise.
 

Reviews

[Lady V]

What do I say to you being crazy? Uh no. Your just a poet and we always have something rolling around in our mind.

"Im your Chef and your Waiter
I'll take your order
So come closer and whisper
In my ear
Sweet words to draw our orbits near"

Classic. I must say, you make a person think when we read your work.
Great poem. These side kick moments are getting better and better. Live, Love and LearnLady V

[A LaDy NaMeD D]

Have no fear
When our worlds Collide
Your anatomy was made for me to fit
Right there inside.

lol i i dont know why but i love this line alot. I love how you used those metaphors, shows mucho creativity. And in my eyes this is a very orginial poem. And no conversing with your self isn't crazy unless the conclusion to the conversation has you ready to murder and massive amount of people.

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Just when I start to get into it, it ends!

"When our worlds Collide
Your anatomy was made for me to fit
Right there inside. "

I see this as such a busy intersection with so many ways for you to keep going with! Nonetheless, I enjoyed the randomness and your word choices are always dope.

[Bud]

I love this piece of art! Humorous and chop full of facts...what more could I ask for?! I thoroughly enjoyed every line in this poem! It has that air about it, yet gets right to the point, concerning the recipient of the message. And it, also, has that little pinch of a dash of romance there, as well. And I am most certain that a form of love is also referenced. All the qualities and ingredients of poem that the masses can connect and relate to!!!! Fantastic work of art, Jason! Keep on writing! Your talent shines!


Bud : >)

[EmpressPoetess]

Jason, great write! I love the metaphors you used. Very ceative. And the flows is smooth as silk! More please!