i need a shower

Muse said i should write a poem

The soft
    carress
makes my  mind explode
(that tantalizing touch)
a roaring ocean in my ears
swallowing my every thought in it's endless depths
     there is only you
(goosebumps on my skin)
     i can feel your heartbeat
        throbbing
    with me
        throbbing
warm like the womb
i close my eyes into your kiss
an oblivion of blackness
a darkness so inviting
    i plunge
(your fingernails on my back)
    love and lust are one
drenched in a tsunami of ecstasy
my ears tremble from the the warmth of your breath
    as you whisper…

    "S**t, I forgot...
          I'm on my period."

Reviews

[Alex Falkner]

Classic, certainly made me laugh.
Brilliantly written, good one J.

[EurasianFlavour]

I know those feels

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:) sensual piece, I love this :) great work. Keep writing!

[Muse]

Woah! I guess that's real life! Lmfao...so many times you men are in the mood, and leave it up to us woman to RUIN the moment. And don't forget the headaches...lol!

[JR Darewood]

true story.

[Muse]

I'm so sorry..you must be scarred for life! lol

[JR Darewood]

unfortunately it's happened more than once. "Uhhh, what is that?" "Oh, that's just a tampon."

[Muse]

TMI!

[JR Darewood]

now you know that I was being literal w/ the line "drenched in a tsunami..."

[JR Darewood]

sorry, I couldn't resist

[Muse]

tsunami....that's why they need a better alert system for that...you need at least a two hour notice. lol