A Crimson Tide in Spring

A Crimson Tide in Spring

A Poem by Mr.Boffin

The fesse upon his shield
ashen-grey from dust
eyes seacold looking
upon the realm.
crimson crystallized,
all upon his
Escutcheon --

Perched upon a hill
a mound,
peeping sounds
he waits and peers
afore the spring
and past the grotto
Astound --

His face now
wind worn, blistered
from the Sunne.
salt and pepper
splayed upon the wind
the springs solace
Tranquil --

Thanatos persists
hovering above.
Blue de France,
sparkling, the spring tide
wondering East,
the sleeping Nymph
Arouse --

Risen, astired
beyond the spring great.
Her beauty,
aesthetically etched
upon her face;
eyes of spring green
Spectating --

Watching our Hoplite
Crimson spreading throughout
the spring tide.
Decelerating --
his face, once aglow
with light
now worn with
Fright.

© 2014 Mr.Boffin


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Very descriptive and well written. I enjoyed this piece a lot. I'll be sure to read your other pieces, for sure!

An incredible writer, you are!

Posted 10 Years Ago


There's past phrasing in this, a wonderful discomfort of words yet written with style; a story told as a traveller might have, leaving myths in his wake! A knight's tale colourfully, quite dramatically told. Must read other posts in a while.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on April 19, 2014
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