Lifes Ugly Lake

so i traveled down a road
which mother said
would make me frown
so i traveled down a road
and indeed did frown
and the road
meandered and tried
to make a crown
no love no lace
in the mirror
my face my frown
has gone in hast
so double back and check
but thrice
i traveled down a road
which mother said
would make me smile
and indeed i did
but smile
and then this road
meandered and i drowned
in life's lakes ugly
so i traveled down a road

Author's Note

Started with the first line and wrote continuously until finished

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

In life so many things to frown about and so many things to be appreciable...A splendid read and write...:)................

[sharonlee]

Nicely done.... I enjoyed this.