Rose In Hand

Lost bud of raining
Hyacinths;
Sloping down the ledge
Lasting,
with Rose in hand --
and Mary's,
Blue blue eyes.

Reviews

[Nicole Williams]

Simple poem beautifully penned.
Great job sir

[Mr.Boffin]

thanks :)

[Gio S.P.]

This is definitely one beautiful piece. It has such few words and yet tells an entire story with raw emotion. Good job, man!

[Mr.Boffin]

thank you very much :)

[Lyn Anderson]

What a beautiful verse. I thought of blue hyacinths before I saw her eyes were blue.

[Lyn Anderson]

Great edit, by the way!