Time Begotten

Time is cruel,
Purblind fool --
Passing idly by

Made sight of You
Alack accrued, in
The Land forgotten

In fickle Wait --
To time and fate.

Reviews

[Bob Sherunkle]

That was great man.Short and big impact.

[Mr.Boffin]

glad you liked :) thanks for stopping by!

[Leslie Philibert]

The first poem I have read from Randall, like the internal rhymes, the enigmatic power of this.

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

There's an esoteric.. Hmm I guess abstraction is the word I want. Yes. Your images are like abstract art put to syllable vs paint. Also the phrase "alack accrued " is running through my mind constantly. Clever and enticing,.this piece.

[Mr.Boffin]

thank you very much! I do tend to lean towards the abstract...that and I've been reading a lot of poems by French Symbolists so i guess their rubbing off on me!