On A Sunday Afternoon

if
cups of two
for three of four

spilled

i would
drown in
your tears.

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

In the words of a true Huntsman. Like this, felt like a toast.

[DaughterNature]

I like the wordplay here, not sure if intentional, but when I read "for three of four" the number words almost sounded like "tea or flour," which of course are things that you would go next door and ask for a cup of -- clever!

[Tayler Riouff]

I like the title of this poem! I'm not quite sure what exactly is going on here but I enjoyed this.